
Iron is about the difficulties of being with one person, about not feeling slighted or making the other person feel
slighted.
Iron is about the iron and phosphorous molecules that float between you
and Patrick in the meat department,
Patrick in a long white blood-streaked smock.
Iron is about a night with Walter, crossing a bridge
on your way to a club that later will crowd with flashing
lights
and dancers, but right now Walter is warning you not to
tell the girls
you’ve been in a war.
You remember sunlight, morning muster
those times you saw your double, same eyes, same rifle, in
Chu Lai.
Iron is about sides of beef behind the steel doors Patrick
exited through
after you two traded stories of your lives since high school,
neither one with a spouse or children, nor the wish to see
each other ever again.
You remember a night with flashing lights and music
and Walter dancing alone to Steppenwolf.
Peter Mladinic’s fourth book of poems, Knives on a Table is available from Better Than Starbucks Publications.
An animal rights advocate, he lives in Hobbs, New Mexico, USA.
One reply on “Iron”
Well done. Thought-provoking and the type of writing that makes me want to reread the piece over and over again.
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